Revised Op-Ed

Kevin Gross

For all the well-informed people who know, and to the ignorant population who don’t, Somali pirates are richer and more powerful than ever. Five days ago, pirates struck their largest jackpot yet: a Saudi-owned supertanker with more than $100 million worth of crude oil onboard. Not to put a damper on the pirates’ previous hijackings, but we’re talking oil, and $100 fucking million of it. Crazy? Yes, but what’s more astonishing is that it took this long for companies to say they’re going to travel a different route. To me, that’s saying companies don’t mind losing a few cargo ships a year because it took a $100 million dollar ship’s seizure for them to open their eyes, sounds to me like they need to lay off that Marley leaf. And I say that because after the Saudi supertanker was seized was the first time a European shipping company, left anonymous but I can’t see why, said they are going to look into rerouting their ships. What the fuck? I’ve never heard something so belligerent other than the following statement, which coincided to say that the company “sees the deteriorating political and humanitarian situation” in Somalia as the cause for piracy. No shit, it’s about time such a high-powered shipping company became well-informed about Somalia’s instability, which by the way has been going on since 1990.
All that talk about the ignorant and uninformed shipping companies has me delusional and eyes half open, ha-ha, not really. The rise of piracy in Somalia is an indication of well-informed people adapting to their environment. As humans, we, better than any other species, can play the game no matter the circumstance. In a country with no central government to guide them, people altered their behavior to something that would guide them, something that coincidentally couldn’t exist with a central government: piracy. With no hint of a central government coming in Somalia’s near future, my highjackers on the high seas will continue their reign! Pirates have reshaped parts of the country by building homes for their families to live in and opening businesses to create jobs for those not willing to conquer on the high seas. The amount of money pirates are making in such a ravaged country is unheard of. Pirates have propelled to earn a star status in Somalia and they deserve it for all the hard work they’ve put in.
The United Nations can’t do anything to stop piracy from existing because it’s too weak of an organization. The UN has a fleet of naval tankers off Somalia’s coast, but they can’t be everywhere at once. Even if they do get a call about a hijacking, those tankers aren’t moving that fast and surely will not prevent it. Not every action is a good effort and that seems to describe the United Nations. Countries that can stop pirates, like the United States by invasion, obviously don’t want to get involved. There aren’t many American ships being hijacked and that’s not a coincidence, they’ve simply chosen to avoid the area. Somalia is a prime location for the piracy business because it has the idiotic Europeans and Middle Eastern countries to the north of it, which serve as lucrative hijackings.
Piracy is a naturally occurring phenomenon that’s so difficult to prevent because of how enormous the oceans are. It’s like a natural shield because we live on land and have zero accountability for the majority of what happens on the high seas. As an outsider looking in, piracy is ingenious, why do you think its been going on for so long? Pirates are simply a product of their environment doing whatever it takes to get by.

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what’s next for my weblog…

i would love to turn my weblog into a Lil’ Wayne theme. he’s the greatest rapper alive because he produces hit mainstream beats and has the underground mixtape notoriety that all rappers can only wish for. for those reading who aren’t familiar with mixtapes, they’re free albums uploaded to the internet by mixtape dj’s, but free makes them less reliable and sometimes confusing and less accessable. i seem to know, or think i do, a lot about where to find the mixtapes and which ones are produced by relevant dj’s. lil wayne puts the mixtapes out the the people to enjoy for free, but with the quality of a label’s cd. conversely there are fake-ass mixtape dj’s that didn’t produce wayne’s beats and make mixtapes for them that cause confusion to some people. i want to turn my weblog into the ” lil wayne mixtape mecca.”

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The change of my emotions

at the beginning of the quarter when we were drafting and revising our analytical research papers, I was very critical in what information I chose to believe while researching.  when i was writing my research paper, I wanted to provide enough complicating information for the audience so it wasn’t limited to a bias, and so readers could decide for themselves at the end of the paper what was right and what was wrong.  i felt like an associated press reporter because I had to keep my personal opinions to myself.

the digital composition project allowed me to freely express anything i wanted in any type of format.  it was definitely a differing experience to me that i related to free association.  i found wordpress as a way to release unfiltered emotions with no regard.  im currently trying to live the rest of my life with “the wordpress” type of expression, express with no regard for others.

the opinion editorial was the perfect mediator between the two extremes of the research projects’ seriousness and wordpress’ desire for unfiltered, sometimes unnessesary, personal opinions.  the op-ed allowed me to persuade others how i felt about piracy in somalia, while still using the relevant information i learned while researching for the research project.  i enjoyed writing this because i could write it with a certain swagger like i was an expert, and it was enjoyable to be able to put in my two cents on the issue, and if that isn’t good enough for the experts, ill pitch them a dime

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rules and conventions of op-ed’s

op-eds are articles written to express ones opinion on an issue.  op-eds are often times supported with studies and facts from past research.  op-eds are written within a general understanding on the issue between the writer and reader which allows the writer to show off what he knows about the issue to back his arguement.

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Op-Ed

            For all the well-informed people who know, and to the ignorant population who don’t, Somali pirates are richer and more powerful than ever.  Five days ago, pirates struck their largest jackpot yet: a Saudi-owned supertanker with more than $100 million worth of crude oil onboard.  Not to put a damper on the pirates’ previous hijackings, but we’re talking oil, and $100 fucking million of it.  Crazy?  Yes, but what’s more astonishing is that it took this long for companies to say they’re going to travel a different route.  To me, that’s saying companies don’t mind losing a few cargo ships a year because it took a $100 million dollar ship’s seizure for them to open their eyes, sounds to me like they need to lay off that Marley leaf.  And I say that because after the Saudi supertanker was seized was the first time a European shipping company, left anonymous but I can’t see why, said they are going to look into rerouting their ships.  What the fuck?  I’ve never heard something so belligerent other than the following statement, which coincided to say that the company “sees the deteriorating political and humanitarian situation” in Somalia as the cause for piracy.  No shit, it’s about time such a high-powered shipping company became well-informed about Somalia’s instability, which by the way has been going on since 1990. 

            All that talk about the ignorant and uninformed shipping companies has me delusional and eyes half open, ha-ha, not really.  The rise of piracy in Somalia is an indication of well-informed people adapting to their environment.  As humans, we, better than any other species, can play the game no matter the circumstance.  In a country with no central government to guide them, people altered their behavior to something that would guide them, something that coincidentally couldn’t exist with a central government: piracy.  With no hint of a central government coming in Somalia’s near future, my highjackers on the high seas will continue their reign!  Pirates have reshaped parts of the country by building homes for their families to live in and opening businesses to create jobs for those not willing to conquer on the high seas.  The amount of money pirates are making in such a ravaged country is unheard of.  Pirates have propelled to earn a star status in Somalia and they deserve it for all the hard work they’ve put in. 

            The United Nations can’t do anything to stop piracy from existing because it’s too weak of an organization.  The UN has a fleet of naval tankers off Somalia’s coast, but they can’t be everywhere at once.  Even if they do get a call about a hijacking, those tankers aren’t moving that fast and surely will not prevent it.  Not every action is a good effort and that seems to describe the United Nations.  Countries that can stop pirates, like the United States by invasion, obviously don’t want to get involved.  There aren’t many American ships being hijacked and that’s not a coincidence, they’ve simply chosen to avoid the area.  Somalia is a prime location for the piracy business because it has the idiotic Europeans and Middle Eastern countries to the north of it, which serve as lucrative hijackings.

            Piracy is a naturally occurring phenomenon that’s so difficult to prevent because of how enormous the oceans are.  It’s like a natural shield because we live on land and have zero accountability for the majority of what happens on the high seas.  As an outsider looking in, piracy is ingenious, why do you think its been going on for so long?  Pirates are simply a product of their environment doing whatever it takes to get by.

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co-op analysis

Ethos-the author doesn’t take a side in the editorial, he just reports it.

Pathos-the paper’s emotion insists pirates aren’t in the wrong for their actions because their just protecting their fishing territory.

Logos-this paper appeals from logic because it says pirates aren’t in the wrong.

this co-op is timely because this problem currently exists. the author has no bias he’s just reporting so the paper wasn’t persuasive. if at all, it had an implicit meaning stamped on the front of it because for all, excluding pirates, piracy=bad. but at the same time everyone the author interviewed was saying why piracy exists and sufficiently backing it up.

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Pirates want cash

THIS CO-OP PROVIDED GREAT COVERAGE OF PIRACY IN SOMALIA.

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Writing for academic and popular audiences

writing for an academic audience forces you to find sources for all the secondary info you want to cover in your paper.  if you don’t then your paper won’t be good and/or it will be the product of plagarism.  you should also provide two sides to your paper so your audience isn’t limited to a bias.  what a great experience.

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Piracy in Somalia

Somali pirates traveling in speedboat.

Somali pirates traveling in speedboat.

For my analytical research project I chose to investigate piracy in Somalia. The absence of a strong central government in Somalia is primarily the reason piracy can flourish there. With no government, the country’s in shambles with little job opportunity and becoming a pirate is a desirable job. The pay is great and having money in a country so impoverished and bombarded is rare and special. Women see this and are interested in marrying pirates because of the sense of security, and pirates are having the time of their lives throwing lavish weddings and building westernized homes for their wife and kids to relax in while they’re on the high seas. Life for a pirate in Somalia couldn’t get better.

But this can’t go on forever. The UN is trying to buckle down on pirate attacks off Somalia’s coast, which leads to the Suez Canal (a major trade pathway), but I believe it’s up to the shipping companies. With the cost of commodities down, the company should be able to pay Somalia a tariff to travel freely through the area. Both parties can be happy and Somalia can use the tariffs to rebuild their country the right way, with a strong central government.

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